My blades blog for FFC

[Blade nath]

Basically i'm writing a blog about the blades for a site called football fan cast.
It's be greatly appreciated if you could give it a read
http://www.footballfancast.com/2012...or-promotion-at-bramall-lane#blog_item_184987
Furthermore it'd be an even bigger help if you could help promote it and give me some feedback.
Please be aware i'm only 17 and very inexperienced before you start slating me.
Thanks!

 

[raul]

17 and on about "saving your money for the boozer"? What does your Mum say??

 

[silverfox]

17 and on about "saving your money for the boozer"? What does your Mum say??

My mum told me off!

But I carried on...

 

[Blade nath]

17 and on about "saving your money for the boozer"? What does your Mum say??

as i've heard several times. 'i was doing the same at your age'

 

[Blade nath]

Furthermore it's symbolism. I'm saying don't listen to the bookies. You're better off spending it down the pub

 

[JohnDenver]

as i've heard several times. 'i was doing the same at your age'

You look half cut in your picture. Coincidence?

By way of feedback, I'd just say avoid cliches at all costs (unless you want to work for the Star). If you can write a piece without using borrowed words - which is much harder than it seems - you could be onto a winner, Brian.

 

[Longtime Blade]

Basically i'm writing a blog about the blades for a site called football fan cast.
It's be greatly appreciated if you could give it a read
http://www.footballfancast.com/2012...or-promotion-at-bramall-lane#blog_item_184987
Furthermore it'd be an even bigger help if you could help promote it and give me some feedback.
Please be aware i'm only 17 and very inexperienced before you start slating me.
Thanks!

 

[Longtime Blade]

You say that the Blades won't come top but have a fair chance of coming second. So who do you think will come top?

 

[Blade nath]

You look half cut in your picture. Coincidence?

By way of feedback, I'd just say avoid cliches at all costs (unless you want to work for the Star). If you can write a piece without using borrowed words - which is much harder than it seems - you could be onto a winner, Brian.

The picture was down to the editor not me and yeah, I don't particularly like using cliche's in my writing, however sometimes you can't avoid it.... Thanks though, much appreciated

 

[Blade nath]

You say that the Blades won't come top but have a fair chance of coming second. So who do you think will come top?

And IMO I reckon Franchise FC will be up there.

My top 7 is:
1: MK dons
2: Us
3: Coventry
4: Notts County
5: Donny
6: Stevenage
7: Brentford
And that's putting my neck on the line

 

[Conroy]

The picture was down to the editor not me and yeah, I don't particularly like using cliche's in my writing, however sometimes you can't avoid it.... Thanks though, much appreciated

Agreed, avoid using cliches's like the plague....

 

[Highbury_Blade]

it's better than Ashton Smashtons's

 

[deter pent]

To use a cliche is old hat in fact a clinch is a cliché so there OK

 

[Pierre's PC]