OLD SONG MADE NEW......

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I know everybody takes the piss with new song post and new members 1st posts so, I’m ready for the onslaught!!!

However, this is a winner!!

We ain’t got a barrel of money,
We’ve got Norwood and Lunny,
But with Wilder and Knill,
We’re in the premier still
Uuuuuunited.........
All together now!!!!!
Come on, sing it, you know you want to!!
 



I know everybody takes the piss with new song post and new members 1st posts so, I’m ready for the onslaught!!!

However, this is a winner!!

We ain’t got a barrel of money,
We’ve got Norwood and Lunny,
But with Wilder and Knill,
We’re in the premier still
Uuuuuunited.........
All together now!!!!!
Come on, sing it, you know you want to!!

Well it's better than most, I'll give it that.
 
Ooh, I've got one...

We're the Bladesmen,
the mighty Bladesmen,
We never lose awaaaaay,

A wimba way a wimba way....

Probably a bad time to release it with our next two away games though :oops:
 
It’s not a bad effort at all to be honest I quite like it and can see it taking off !
I never heard it sang but wasn’t there another version too...

we ain’t got a barrel of money,
We ain’t got Woodward or currie
But with brownie and tongue
We’ve still got this song
Uuuuuuuniiiiited

The heady days of Tom Hark. Good times.
 
I know everybody takes the piss with new song post and new members 1st posts so, I’m ready for the onslaught!!!

However, this is a winner!!

We ain’t got a barrel of money,
We’ve got Norwood and Lunny,
But with Wilder and Knill,
We’re in the premier still
Uuuuuunited.........
All together now!!!!!
Come on, sing it, you know you want to!!

Good effort , but may I suggest the following improvements which could make it a strong contender for this year's Ivor Novello awards :- :)

* At line 2 , substitute 'and' for ' but' .

* There are 2 too many syllables in line 4 so just drop 'in the' .

# nitpickersrus.

Sounds good to me .
 

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