Preview for Scunthorpe

[AndySmithJourno]

Hi guys,

I wrote a preview for the website below, feel free to check it out! UTB.

http://www.yorkshire-voice.com/the-...lead-at-the-top-as-scunthorpe-visit-the-lane/

 

[Pierre's PC]

Andy, can I call you Andy?

Before I click that shit - are you or have you ever been a Nigerian Prince?

 

[AndySmithJourno]

Andy, can I call you Andy?

Before I click that shit - are you or have you ever been a Nigerian Prince?

Yes, in another life.

 

[Tyler Durden]

I like it. Clear and concise.

Online journalism is where it's at.

Don't ever lower yourself by working for a newspaper. It's a outdated format filled with non-journalist, lie-peddling arseholes. I look forward to the day when the print media both local and national is extinct.

 

[AndySmithJourno]

I like it. Clear and concise.

Online journalism is where it's at.

Don't ever lower yourself by working for a newspaper. It's a outdated format filled with non-journalist, lie-peddling arseholes. I look forward to the day when the print media both local and national is extinct.

Cheers for the kind words. I'm studying to be a journalist currently, so not quite looking for a job in print media just yet.

 

[1danewhitehouse]

Nice concise preview. The one constructive criticism I would make is "Kevin and Madden....." doesn't read right. Calling one by their first name and the other by their surname in that sentence is a mistake in my humble opinion. Van Veen and Madden or to avoid repeating the "Van Veen" used in the previous sentence, perhaps "the striking duo" or "The Dutchman and Madden"......

 

[SteveBlade]

"The Dutchman"

Racist

 

[Lane Ender]

I like it. Clear and concise.

Online journalism is where it's at.

Don't ever lower yourself by working for a newspaper. It's a outdated format filled with non-journalist, lie-peddling arseholes. I look forward to the day when the print media both local and national is extinct.

That would be a sad day TD